March of Microanalysis: Day 5
Microfiction Entry Day 5:
First mistake? Trusting Old Nick.
Alrighty, we’re getting somewhere now. Five whole words to play with. Adverb and adjectives can join in the fun. Characters start appearing. Still, with so few words to spare, it helps to use characters or names that are chock full of personality, such as Satan. He’s got quite a lot of personality (and soul, I hear). So why did I use “Old Nick” and not simply “Satan”? After all, I could have 20% more story if I had just said Satan.
Well, “Old Nick” is a good nickname, and has its own connotations. Satan is more like a genus, and Old Nick a species. Everyone knows Satan is the devil, but what kind of devil is he? The Devil is bland dude. Old Nick, however, has a well-tailored suit, impeccable manners, and would never insult a lady even while stealing her soul. Names are important, and worth the space if they will help you convey the nuances of their character quickly.
Also, if you do meet Old Nick, don't sign anything. Trust me.
Through March, I'm posting a breakdown/analysis of the microfiction I posted on the corresponding day in February. This is probably only interesting to you if you care about the mechanics of writing, or if you know me personally.